Photo Storyboard/ Review for 'The Bargainer' Scene 1

Overall, it seems that my first attempt at this scene may have been too dark. I would like to reshoot this either at a lighter time in the day or (as it is a darker time of year) set in a different room with more light exposed onto it. This may be hard as my house doesn't have that much light and is bad for exposure in general however I'm sure I can find a way to solve this.

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